| Poems | by Richard Finneran |
Some things you brought to mind I. A Joke You dared me once to write a six-beat line. I'd asked you why pentameter became the norm, and there were many reasons: hard for it to split in half or three and fail to function as a line; not sing-song like tetrameter, but long enough to make a statement without rambling on. But six feet somehow didn't work: it always seemed like four and two, or three and three, or five and one. The paper says you passed away the other day. They'll bury you on Friday, six feet underground. That's one too many feet. I'm sure you would complain. II. A Question You told me once you never could decide if Eliot or Yeats had been the best to ever live. You'd vacillate between the two, and when you had decided, say, that Eliot had won, you'd read a bit of Yeats and reconsider it again. The paper says you passed away the other day. I wonder if you've yet to pick your favorite. You'll probably lecture him on how he can improve. III. A Hope I said once that a feeling was like death, and you corrected me by pointing out my simile was incomplete, for death was one thing poets can't describe, or can describe but incompletely. Death's unknown, so any simile or metaphor could only guess at what it would be like. The paper says you passed away the other day. I hope that it's as I imagined it to be: that heavy, silent calm; the rest after the song. In fondest memory of Dr. Robert Kirkpatrick, 1939-2004 | |
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